This is my first adult attempt at poetry, something I loved as a child. Please be gentle in your critique of it.
I love that we are all connected, I love that sense of one
That nature reconnects us all when everything is done
The gentle swaying of the trees reminds me of my soul
That we were once from earth it seems a fairly simple role
Our only job whilst being here is learning what we need
The earth, the sun and water join to blossom with the seed
No need to stray too far but most forget the magic script
And suffer from a disconnect as from our plan we’re ripped
We struggle with our role it seems and lose the sense of flow
And make life so much harder, inside we always know
The things we need to focus on get lost within the mix
And conflict becomes the norm for us, we lose the will to fix
If only we would trust in life and allow the love to flow
It’s not our job to plan it all as nature always knows
If only we would trust ourselves and show up to witness now
The world would be a better place and full of fizz and pow
Our lives are meant to play with love & ease and fun
But we forget our childhood magic and seek to push and run
We need to slow ourselves right down and take the time to play
And when we finally get it right the magic saves the day
I love that we are all connected, I love that sense of one
That nature reconnects us all when everything is done
The gentle swaying of the trees reminds me of my soul
That we were once from earth it seems a fairly simple role
It’s nice 🙂
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Thank you. I’m glad people like it.
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My pleasure 🙂
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Beautiful Suzi, puts into words what we seem to have lost or forgotten x
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Thanks for your kind words Diana x
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A triumph, can’t wait for your second poem.
So pleased you are following your dream 😍
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Thanks Sandra. Concentrating on my childrens book just now but may publish an excerpt at some point. X
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Fab Suzi I’ve shared it on my Facebook page, here’s to fame and fortune 💝
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Thanks so much. I’ll drink to that!!!
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